Week 8 Comments and Feedback


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Overall, I would rate the quality of the comments I get pretty good. Everyone is very polite and helpful. I found some comments that only included positive things or pointed out how good the story was and what they liked. While those comments are very uplifting, I think a good combination of what you liked in the story and what you didn't, or what could have been improved is a great comment. That way, I can see what works for the story and consider what I could revise or change.

When I give feedback, I always try to include what I liked about the story, what could be changed, ask questions that I have from reading it, and give general advice if needed. The WWW feedback strategy has been working for me really well. I always try to be as helpful as possible when providing feedback.

I think that blogs introductions and blog comments are an excellent way to connect with people in the class. Especially in the online setting that we have. I am happy with my introduction posts and blog posts. I think they provide a way for my classmates to get to know me.

In order to make the feedback comments more useful, I need to stick with the feedback strategies that I've been using, but also research and experiment with others. Trying out different strategies could be very beneficial for my classmates and me.


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